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My biggest mistake,
Was not taking your hand,
Leading you up the stairs,
Then falling forever with you.

Now I just sit here,
Sitting all alone,
Watching the ski,
Watching two bodies fall.
Hearing nothing but laugher,
Seeing nothing but smiles.

I stare at the ground,
The ground at which our bodies should've been,
Nothing but dirt,
Nothing but silence.

Now I just sit here,
Sitting all alone,
Watching the ski,
Watching the bodies fall,
Hearing nothing but laughter,
Seeing nothing but smiles.

My eyes following them to the ground,
Staring at the ground,
The ground where the two bodies lay.

You are smiling, smiling for finding someone,
Who will fall forever with you.

Now I just sit here,
Sitting all alone,
Frowning, frowning for not taking your hand,
Leading you up those stairs,
And falling forever with you,
Instead of living,
Living forever without you.
©2005-2009 ~Ryu4366
:iconryu4366:

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:iconsam-vs-century:
Interesting.. :rose:

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Gohan, "Atleast he doesn't have his sword out anymore."
Krillin, "Yeah and your dad put his finger away, too."


Vegeta, "That guy just pointed his finger and Kakarot fell down!"

:giggle:
:iconryu4366:
yea...i know... i wrote the ending first, but then i couldnt think of what to write to begin it, so the ending became the beginning, then, i could hear it as a song while i was writing it, but i didnt want it to be a song, so i messed it up... It could do without a couple of things... but i am too lazy. Anyway, thanks for reading it.

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"I'd be gothic, but I can't afford to shop at hot topic"... now I have a shirt that says that, and if you ask hot topic to get it... I WILL KILL YOU!
:iconsam-vs-century:
lol okaly dokaly :P

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Gohan, "Atleast he doesn't have his sword out anymore."
Krillin, "Yeah and your dad put his finger away, too."


Vegeta, "That guy just pointed his finger and Kakarot fell down!"

:giggle:
:iconxxihateeverythingxx:
its sad...

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i'll give you duct tape flowers,
just to make you smile.
:iconryu4366:
yes it is...

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"I'd be gothic, but I can't afford to shop at hot topic"... now I have a shirt that says that, and if you ask hot topic to get it... I WILL KILL YOU!
:iconkuketsuki:
Aww! It's so sad...but so sweet... I see a lot of meaning in this

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It is man's natural sickness to believe he possesses the Truth

Izak is the coolest thing on four legs...and when he's on two, he's the coolest thing on two legs xD
:iconamp-essex:
:jawdrop: wow. . . . :sigh: that seems to be all i can ever say to your poems. . they always take the words away. . . .

Amp

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to be in the act of masterbation
while in the process of procrastination,
you are putting application
to what makes up this 'great' nation
... such a depressing (though not startling) revaluation!
(got it from lil britt ^^)

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